Not only will you not move on to the next level of your studies, you won't continue your studies at all. Then I shall study on my own... everything I can. With nopony watching over me this time.
And so she did. _______________ Well, um... yeah. It took a while to make this. A longer while. In fact it took so long I don't even care to remember how long. But I guess that's what happenes when you try to draw something much more complex than anything before using a different style you just came up with.
Alright. You asked for Critique. I see a great big picture with a good amount of awesome. But I see a detail or 2 that needs to be changed or explained. The lightning at the bottom makes me think the staff is charged but looking at the top shows me its not. I can understand a little branching out of it but in my non expert opinion it goes down a little too far. And the tail.It looks cool but why is it only those two strand flailing in the wind. Why not more of them? But for all those things I point out I see better things. Like the armor and the cloak. The armor shows great detail but is general enough to make you wonder if it was from a temple or from a vendor in another country. The cloak makes you wonder how long she has traveled due to how damaged and torn it is. The horn explains "Don't mess with me. I have enough to take you out and make a cup of tea while doing it." And with what you have stated in the backstory and in the comments makes me wonder if someone will take this adaptation and make it into a story or not. That is my opinion of non expertise. Anyway if i gave a score for this 9/10 for me. Dont know about others though but this good
And what are the achievements of your fragile Kingdom? It is a corpse rotting slowly from within while maggots writhe in its belly. It was built with the toil of ponies and creatures, and now it is inhabited by frightened foals to whom the glories of those times are half-forgotten legends. I have forgotten nothing and my wisdom has expanded far beyond mere mortal frailties.
Yes I'm jealous that Magazine called Wired chose this, whatever you made and added in. They didn't choose any of my drawings. So what makes this Twilight Sparkle so interesting.
I was that Kroger's and I saw this magazine called Wired! it's a greyish white book and look it up on Google search. You might find your drawing in there. But I'm happy for you and I'm not jealous anymore. I thought you would know by now. They always will pick and choose without letting anyone know about and get most of the credit, even though the credit goes to you.
I'd have to inspect the situation first, but without even knowing where this picture is I can't really judge. If you could point me to it I would appreciate it.
Let's see I know I can think of one thing; 1. you come over here 2. rent a car 3. I'll give you info where I live 4. Take me to Kroger's and show you the magazine. 5. research online and try very hard.
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